Yesterday was Powder Puff Football and Iron Man Volleyball. We got third
in both volleyball and football! Today is fairytale day. Aurora and Tessa both
won in our class. In English class today, we started out by talking about CBL.
She told us that our final solution would be due next Monday. Our journal
writing for the day was our thoughts about the writing process. We also went
over how to give good feedback on our Where
I’m From poem. How we give our feedback is the two stars and a wish method.
You write down two specific things about the writing that you liked. The
wish part is what you wonder or wish the author did differently. After they
showed us how we should give feedback, we had to go to our groups, and put it
into action. We read the other people’s poems, and started to give them feedback on what they
could do differently. Overall, today we had a successful day.
Wow what a great piece of writing!! Great Job tufty
ReplyDeleteWow that was just beautiful Tootie!
ReplyDeleteVery enjoyable piece of writing
ReplyDeleteI think this brought a tear to my eye... ;(
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